http://ravensword.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] ravensword.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] comment_fic2009-01-11 08:32 am

Sunday Free For All

Yesterday was so much fun, it's time for some more!

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[identity profile] draco-somnians.livejournal.com 2009-01-11 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)

SGA, Vegas John Sheppard/ Vegas Rodney McKay, heat
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Re: SGA, Vegas John Sheppard/ Vegas Rodney McKay, heat

[identity profile] synekdokee.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 12:58 am (UTC)(link)
It's so weird reading about these two without the emotional connection, and especially this McKay. And how John's thoughts are completely void of feelings for McKay.

Also, this was very hot.

Re: SGA, Vegas John Sheppard/ Vegas Rodney McKay, heat

[identity profile] tzzzz.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 01:15 am (UTC)(link)
That was really hot. But it also makes me dying to know who Rodney is married to.

Re: SGA, Vegas John Sheppard/ Vegas Rodney McKay, heat

[identity profile] hestia-lacey.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 01:17 am (UTC)(link)
What gets him there is remembering how McKay faced him in the interrogation room. Ngh. Yes. That. That scene was pure porn, wasn't it?

This is a lovely little dagger of a fic. For all it's heat - Nevada desert, John on his knees (my bullet-proof kink) and for reasons I won't examine too closely, Rodney's wedding ring - there was a chill to this too, but a complementary one. Just lovely.

Re: SGA, Vegas John Sheppard/ Vegas Rodney McKay, heat

[identity profile] jimpage363.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 01:30 am (UTC)(link)
Also a possibility for those two irredeemably screwed up versions of our favorites. Thanks for sharing it - vivid and graphic and grim.
ext_1911: (john & rodney vegas)

Re: SGA, Vegas John Sheppard/ Vegas Rodney McKay, heat

[identity profile] telesilla.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow, that's...twisty chest, in a really good way, mind you. Oh John....

Re: SGA, Vegas John Sheppard/ Vegas Rodney McKay, heat

[identity profile] inkscribe.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 02:39 am (UTC)(link)
*fans self*

What gets him there is remembering how McKay faced him in the interrogation room.

*nods in agreement*


McKay, predictably, is neatly trimmed and smells like soap. John wonders who it is that usually does this for him—male or female, wife, partner, thing-on-the-side.

I wonder the same thing! :-D
sid: (McShep chair)

Re: SGA, Vegas John Sheppard/ Vegas Rodney McKay, heat

[personal profile] sid 2009-01-19 04:59 am (UTC)(link)
Awesome. Loved this description: It's too dark to see anything, really, even though it's the middle of the day. The few shards of sunlight through the blinds only illuminate dust.

Great sense of setting!

Re: SGA, Vegas John Sheppard/ Vegas Rodney McKay, heat

[identity profile] ampliflyer.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 05:58 am (UTC)(link)
Oh. No matter how I try to look at this, it always comes to: Oh John. At least he's thinking about McKay - in his non-emotional way.
And McKay checking his hair... Glancing at John and walking out... So delicious.

You captured well the dryness and emptiness. I very much liked.

Re: SGA, Vegas John Sheppard/ Vegas Rodney McKay, heat

[identity profile] gaffsie.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 12:54 pm (UTC)(link)
I like the distance and coldness between them even though (because?) it hurts a little to see them like that.

Re: SGA, Vegas John Sheppard/ Vegas Rodney McKay, heat

[identity profile] accidentalfan.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 03:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Oof. Very hot and very good, with just that edge of darkness wandering into seediness to make it more so.

Re: SGA, Vegas John Sheppard/ Vegas Rodney McKay, heat

[identity profile] draco-somnians.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 04:12 pm (UTC)(link)

OMG thank you thank you! *g* I love it! Vegas John has some serious issues! Lol.

Re: SGA, Vegas John Sheppard/ Vegas Rodney McKay, heat

[identity profile] beautybecks.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 05:55 pm (UTC)(link)
It is so weird not seeing all of McKay's emotions right at the surface but this is incredibly hot. Of course John would swallow McKay, McKay's essence being a drug, he needs it, even if he doesn't want it, and of course, especially since this is so self-destructive, of course he wants it. Badly.