ext_31778 ([identity profile] hematitebadger.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] comment_fic2014-01-31 01:00 am

Friday: Elements

Good morning, comment ficcers! [livejournal.com profile] hematitebadger again, back for my final day of hosting. I hope you've enjoyed my time at the helm! Today we're going to break it down to the basics, because our theme is Elements. The fundamental building blocks of a thing, whether you want to interpret that as things like carbon and hydrogen, air and fire, generosity and loyalty, or any other idea that might strike you. Tear the universe down into simple particles, then rebuild it in exciting new combinations!

The rules still haven't changed:
No more than five prompts in a row.
No more than three prompts in the same fandom.
No spoilers in prompts.
If your fill contains spoilers, warn and leave plenty of space.

Prompts should be formatted as follows:
Fandom, Character+/Character, Prompt

Some examples to get the ball rolling...
+ My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Pinkie Pie + any, sometimes they think she's really the element of surprise
+ Doctor Who, Amy, fire
+ Megamind, Megamind, the elements that make a good supervillain

Not feeling any of today’s prompts? Visit the lonely prompt archive and brighten someone’s day. For more recent prompts to write, you can also use LJ’s advanced search options to limit keyword results to only comments in this community.

[identity profile] sksdwrld.livejournal.com 2014-01-31 01:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Confessions of Dorian Gray, Dorian/any male, ice
Edited 2014-01-31 13:47 (UTC)

Fire and Ice

[identity profile] ms-bekahrose.livejournal.com 2014-01-31 02:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Dorian/Toby

My writing sucks tonight, but here you go, my dear :).
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It was like a study in polar opposites when they were together. Dorian felt like he was burning up; Toby teasing him until he thought he was going to combust and burn right through silk sheets and the thick, cloud-like mattress.

Even as he slid into Toby, fingers clenching at the too-cool skin of his narrow hips, he felt like this time, this time. He’d finish and see the other man melted beneath him.

And yet.

And yet when the tables were turned, and Toby had Dorian’s leg hooked up and over his shoulders and was sliding his way in so… very… slowly. Drawing it out, making it last until he bottomed out and they were flush.

Toby was cold to the touch, like ice, but not; there was none of that damp chill that came when you handled ice. It was dry and cold and wonderful.

It felt like Dorian was being burned. That slow, cool burn you can only get from handling ice for far too long. Toby filled him, stretched him and the icy cool burn was delicious, setting Dorian’s teeth to bite into his lower lip, lest he cry out and the burn stop.

Re: Fire and Ice

[identity profile] sksdwrld.livejournal.com 2014-01-31 11:56 pm (UTC)(link)
How? How is this teh suck? Dorian and Tobyyyyyyy guh! Hotnesssssss

Re: Fire and Ice

[identity profile] ms-bekahrose.livejournal.com 2014-02-01 07:46 am (UTC)(link)
You are the best! So glad you liked this, sweetie! *hugs* <3