ext_7373 ([identity profile] neshel.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] comment_fic2009-06-18 07:40 am

Thursday: On Vacation

My last day... *pout* I shall have to come up with some crazy themes and do this again!

Today's theme is On Vacation.

After yesterday's insanity, our characters really need a break. What do they do to get away from their normal lives?

Please think about our wonderful codemonkeys and use the correct format (the second is for crossovers).

Fandom, Pairing, Prompt
Fandom1/Fandom2, Pairing, Prompt

Firefly, River, Building sand-castles on the beach
Torchwood/Heroes, Jack/Ianto/Gabriel, A broken stopwatch spoils half their vacation plans

Please remember not to post more than 5 prompts in a row and more than 3 prompts per fandom. If one or more of your prompts are answered, you can prompt again later in the day.

If you don't see anything you like, you can always Adopt a Lonely Prompt.

[identity profile] 1trackmind.livejournal.com 2009-06-18 04:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Numb3rs, Don/Charlie, cabin

Numb3rs, Don/Charlie, Cabin - NC-17 part one

[identity profile] devon99.livejournal.com 2009-06-20 09:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Hope you like this. I actually tried to spend a bit of time on this, although I must admit I was somewhat influenced by Emma's fic flurries which is one of my faves. I already did a cabin fic on my LJ but wanted to do something snow filled!! Anyway, enough rambling, hope you like.


“Have I said thank you for this?” Charlie asked as he gazed out of the window at the snow covered landscape.

"Oh, only one or two ...dozen...times," came the warm amused voice of the dark haired man from behind him.

Don smiled affectionately as Charlie turned towards him, smiling brighter than the sun on the snow outside their cabin. He wrapped his arms around Charlie’s waist and drew him closer, bringing his brother in tight against his body.

"Well thank you again," Charlie smiled, nuzzling into the juncture of Don’s neck and shoulder, inhaling the clean, masculine scent that was purely Don.

"Love you, Charlie," Don growled softly.

“I should hope so too,” Charlie replied, before laughing and arching away as Don’s fingers jabbed him in his ribs. “Okay, okay, I love you too.”

“That’s better,” Don said, then pulled Charlie in tighter for a soft kiss.

This weekend was going to be great. Don had been offered loan of the cabin from an old college friend and had jumped at the chance for some alone time with Charlie. They would have two full days at the cabin, long enough to recharge their batteries.

The cabin had a small kitchen, bathroom, bedroom and a cozy living room all on one floor. In the living room, a comfy sofa sat in front of a beautiful, large real fire. Don's smile widened at the thought of the space between the sofa and fire. He had quite definite plans for that space after dinner.

"Let's go outside," Charlie begged, turning his big brown eyes on the older man. “I want to play in the snow.”

"My brother...the big kid," Don laughed, but he knew he was powerless to resist those big eyes.

"Come on," Charlie added, his eyes darkening even further. "I promise, I'll make it worth your while later," he said huskily.

"Well, in that case," Don laughed swatting Charlie’s ass.

~

Numb3rs, Don/Charlie - NC-17 part two

[identity profile] devon99.livejournal.com 2009-06-20 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
For a while they were simply content to walk in the snow and take in the clean air and noise free environment until Charlie ran ahead of Don and began a snowball fight, laughing as his first shot hit his brother square in the face.

Don won by sneaking up on Charlie and shaking a snow covered tree, that had covered his brother and made him look like a snowman.

Don helped brush off the snow from Charlie’s face and hair and then enveloped him in a quick hug.

"Want you, Charlie." Don's voice was a rough caress of warm air into Charlie's ear.

Don felt the slender body tremble and knew it had nothing to do with the frosty landscape all around them.

"Out here?" Charlie asked. He wanted Don, but gazed around wide-eyed at the thought of making love where they stood.

"We can’t, Charlie," Don said pulling back from his brother. “It’s too big a risk, I want to, but I just meant we should head back.”

“Tell me Don, if we could. Tell me how you would take me.”

“If we could…” Don stared into Charlie’s eyes, “…I would take you in my arms and kiss you. Hard and deep, my tongue wrapping around yours, hot and wet in your mouth. I’d rub your cock through your jeans; get you nice and hard for me, little brother.”

Charlie moaned softly and Don noted with satisfaction the way that Charlie’s eyes had darkened with desire.

“Then what Don?”

“Then I’d push you up against that tree, Charlie,” Don continued, his voice husky and low, ”I’d have you spread wide, hands on the trunk, just like I was going to frisk you. I’d reach round, unzip your jeans and pull them down your thighs with your briefs. You’d like that Charlie, the cold air all around your hard cock, mmm?”

“Yeah, I’d like that. Would you touch me, Donny? Would you wrap your fingers around me and make me come for you?”

"Yes I’d touch you, but not there. I’d stroke the skin on your ass, spread your cheeks, then press my cold finger up inside you, make you moan for me. I’d give you my hand, let you taste yourself, let you suck on my fingers, get them nice and wet then thrust them back inside you, all warm and tight."

Charlie panted softly as Don’s sin rich voice caused heat to pool in his groin.

“I’d twist my fingers, curl them inside of you, make you scream for more and then, when you begged me, I’d unzip my pants, and press my hard, aching, dripping cock right up inside you, and I’d fuck you until the only words you’d remember would be faster, harder, deeper and my name.”

Charlie grabbed hold of Don’s arm and pulled him along as he practically broke into a run towards the cabin.

"We need to get back," Charlie's voice was rough with arousal, “like, right now.”

Don laughed as he let himself be dragged along by his brother and thought about the little space in front of the fireplace.

Yeah, this definitely was going to be a great weekend.

~

Re: Numb3rs, Don/Charlie - NC-17 part two

[identity profile] 1trackmind.livejournal.com 2009-06-21 07:22 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! Thank you! I love it when Charlie's told what will happen (or would happen). One of my favorite things! It's lovely, thank you!

Re: Numb3rs, Don/Charlie - NC-17 part two

[identity profile] devon99.livejournal.com 2009-06-21 11:18 am (UTC)(link)
Very glad you liked it:)