http://stardust-made.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] stardust-made.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] comment_fic 2014-06-11 04:56 pm (UTC)

Beautiful. Drenched in feelings without being cloying, powerful imagery and packing-a-punch prose. (Sat him down and handed over the shoebox he’d been clutching like a treasure chest, so shiny-brand-new it hurt to look at and smelling like a store, a real goddamn store, all chemicals and bright lights, fake sunshine packaged up for people who were/weren’t/didn’t have to be afraid of the dark.) So much in so little, you should visit the short form more often!

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