ext_166134 ([identity profile] daria234.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] comment_fic 2014-09-07 03:22 am (UTC)

Re: fill 2/2

This is totally lovely and terrific.

:) I love that Talia got a mention!

I love these lines too:

"You're terrible," Bucky says. It's not no, Jason notices.

but for all that the Winter Soldier is deadly and swift, his friend is a good man. That's the last thing Gotham needs right now.

He lets Bucky press him up against the rails and kiss him fierce, all teeth and tongue, whiskey and smoke, and he tries not to think too much about the parts of it, buried beneath the sharp edges, that say be careful and maybe even I'll miss you.


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