http://ravensword.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] ravensword.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] comment_fic2009-09-28 07:41 am

Monday - Temptation Day

Greetings folks!

I'm running in to pinch hit while we work out a transatlantic glitch.

Today I'd like to play with Temptation as our theme...

Seduction, the fall from grace, the slippery slope into damnation, the road to hell paved with good intentions...as innocent as enticing someone to skip school or go along with a prank...as dark and twisted as seducing an angel to fall...and everything in between...


Make the code monkeys happy and formulate your prompts properly:

Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Faith/Willow, "Want, Take, Have"
Supernatural/Leverage, Eliot/Castiel, not everything is so black and white
RPS, Jared/JDM, subtle isn't really his strong suit

As always, follow the rules: No more than 3 prompts per fandom, no more than 5 in a row...come back and prompt more once some of yours are answered.

Go out and rock this monday!

Theme=temptation
lilyleia78: Close up of a lily in black and white (SGA: John and Rodney)

[personal profile] lilyleia78 2009-09-28 03:21 pm (UTC)(link)
SGA, John/Rodney, Don't ask, Don't tell, Don't fall in love

SGA, John/Rodney, Don't ask, Don't tell, Don't fall in love

[identity profile] penguingal.livejournal.com 2009-09-28 04:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Don't ask, don't tell. That's the rule, and it's one that John Sheppard has taken to heart. He never talks about it with anyone; he's bad at talking about his feelings anyway. But the more time he spends around Rodney McKay, the worse it gets.

They've had their fun--and Rodney is surprisingly creative in bed--but that's where it's supposed to end. They're no different with each other out in the field, snarking at one another without reservation. They don't even talk about the whens and wheres; they tend to just show up at one or the other's quarters and fall into the usual activities.

Rodney likes playing with John's hair. John likes massaging Rondey's shoulders. They both like sucking cock. That's all it is.

Except John has started to notice the way a blue shirt will pick up Rodney's eyes or the way a dazzling smile at a really cool piece of Ancient technology will make Rodney look younger. He tries to find ways to make more of those smiles appear because when he does Rodney looks at him in a way that makes his stomach flip. These are things he knows he's not supposed to do, and he tries to stop himself, he really does. But Rodney's pull is unexpected and far stronger than he's capable of resisting.

He thinks the military needs a new rule: don't ask, don't tell... don't fall in love.
Edited 2009-09-28 18:01 (UTC)

Re: SGA, John/Rodney, Don't ask, Don't tell, Don't fall in love

[identity profile] lobelia321.livejournal.com 2009-09-28 08:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely little nutshell. And the last line...! :-) Thanks for this!

Re: SGA, John/Rodney, Don't ask, Don't tell, Don't fall in love

[identity profile] penguingal.livejournal.com 2009-09-29 03:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it. Believe it or not, this is my first little foray into writing SGA. :)

Re: SGA, John/Rodney, Don't ask, Don't tell, Don't fall in love

[identity profile] guiltyreasons.livejournal.com 2009-09-29 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
Oh just love that. It was so sweet and John just needs to stop resisting already.

Re: SGA, John/Rodney, Don't ask, Don't tell, Don't fall in love

[identity profile] penguingal.livejournal.com 2009-09-29 04:01 pm (UTC)(link)
I know right! All that resisting isn't healthy, John.
lilyleia78: Close up of Rodney flexed and holding gun (SGA: Rodney guh)

Re: SGA, John/Rodney, Don't ask, Don't tell, Don't fall in love

[personal profile] lilyleia78 2009-09-29 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! That's beautiful. I love it.

Give in John. :)

Re: SGA, John/Rodney, Don't ask, Don't tell, Don't fall in love

[identity profile] penguingal.livejournal.com 2009-09-29 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh I'm so glad! I've never actually written SGA before, so this was new for me. :D

John really does need to get over it.

Re: SGA, John/Rodney, Don't ask, Don't tell, Don't fall in love

[identity profile] tresa-cho.livejournal.com 2009-09-29 01:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh boys.

Re: SGA, John/Rodney, Don't ask, Don't tell, Don't fall in love

[identity profile] penguingal.livejournal.com 2009-09-29 04:04 pm (UTC)(link)
I do love my boys. :)

Re: SGA, John/Rodney, Don't ask, Don't tell, Don't fall in love

[identity profile] omg-wtf-yeah.livejournal.com 2011-03-18 10:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely. ♥