Tuesday - On The Road

[be-themoon.livejournal.com]

Hey everyone! I'm be_themoon , guest-hosting this week. Firstly, thanks to monica_catch22 for stepping in for me yesterday. Secondly! Today's theme is On The Road - road trips, commuting to work, driving home for the holidays, going across country for a job - any way you want to spin it!

You guys know the rules: No more than 5 prompts, and only 3 prompts per fandom unless someone answers one of your prompts.

No spoilers in your prompt until a week after air-date - if there are spoilers in your story, you need to warn and leave three spaces.

And of course, remember the format! Fandom, Character/Character, prompt.

Supernatural, Dean/Castiel, three hundred miles to the next job
Chronicles of Narnia, Susan, she doesn't take the train anymore
Merlin, author's choice, road trip AU

If none of the prompts catch your interest, take a gander at the Lonely Prompts Listing on delicious and adopt a few!

[Theme tag="ontheroad"]

Comments

[rocketgirl2.livejournal.com]

Ooh, I really like this. There are a couple of places where you have tense issues, but overall, it's well written. I can just picture the Susan you wrote--it's very sad, but realistic. Good job. :)

[jennytork.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

I'm glad you picked up on the tense issues -- honestly, it was done that way on purpose to show how disjointed her thoughts have become. I hope it was effective and didn't jar you out of the story!

[jennytork.livejournal.com]

WHOOPS. Let me amend that to "done on purpose EXCEPT where I put 'real life WAS' instead of IS." THAT one was an honest-to-goodness goof! Thanks for catching it!

*laughing at herself*