ext_15134 ([identity profile] evil-little-dog.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] comment_fic2020-07-20 04:30 am

Dydd Llun: Twenty-Seven Word Fills

Good morning all! I am this week's host and would like to welcome you with a favorite of mine (and I hope yours) - the twenty-seven word fill! Prompts can be anything but fills should be only twenty-seven words long (or in multiples of twenty-seven).

Just a few rules:
No more than five prompts in a row.
No more than three prompts in the same fandom.
Use the character's full names and fandom's full name for ease adding to the Lonely Prompts spreadsheet.
No spoilers in prompts for a month after airing, or use the spoiler cut option found here.
If your fill contains spoilers, warn and leave plenty of space, or use the above mentioned spoiler cut.

Prompts should be formatted as follows: [Use the character's full names and fandom's full name]
Fandom, Character +/ Character, Prompt

Some examples to get the ball rolling...
+ Star Trek: TOS, Christine Chapel+Nyoto Uhura, Bechdel Test
+ Lucifer, Trixie Espinoza+Amenidiel, "You helped Mommy before, didn't you?"
+ DC Justice League (movie), Barry Allen+Diana Prince, He has a crush

We are now using AO3 to bookmark filled prompts. If you fill a prompt and post it to AO3 please add it to the Bite Sized Bits of Fic from 2020 collection. See further notes on this new option here.

Not feeling any of today’s prompts? Check out the just created Lonely Prompts Spreadsheet. For more recent prompts to write, you can also use LJ’s advanced search options to limit keyword results to only comments in this community.

While the Lonely Prompts Spreadsheet and LJ's advanced search options are available, bookmarking the links of prompts you like might work better for searching for in the future.


tag=twenty-seven word fills

[identity profile] cozy-coffee.livejournal.com 2020-07-20 11:53 am (UTC)(link)
Any, any/any, heartbeat

Fill : Hawaii Five-0, Steve/Noelani (27 x 13 = 351 words)

[identity profile] helsinkibaby.livejournal.com 2020-07-20 06:04 pm (UTC)(link)


Steve knows that sound travels faster than light so he’s not surprised that he hears something first, a fast whoosh-whoosh that makes Noelani’s hand tighten in his. His breath catches and he looks down at her. “Is that-?”

She nod, her eyes glistening. Normally he can’t stand to see her cry but the way she’s smiling tells him that these are happy tears.

“Isn’t it fast?” he asks and she shakes her head but it’s the sonographer who answers.

“A baby’s heart beats faster than an adult’s does... and we’re not all Navy SEALs with lower heart rates either, Dad.”

Steve inclines his head, conceding the point, then Noelani sucks her breath in sharply. “Steve,” is all she has to say to have him following her gaze towards the screen in the corner. He’s spent most of the last couple of days inwardly panicking that he won’t be able to make anything out but the shape is unmistakable, two legs, two arms, a head and a perfectly formed if tiny body, as textbook a sonogram picture as he’s ever seen anywhere.

His jaw drops and he can’t speak.

That’s their baby.

His hand tightens on Noelani’s and he takes his eyes off the screen for just long enough to lean in and kiss the top of her head. Tears are rolling down her cheeks and his smile is wide enough to hurt. “Well?” the sonographer asks, looking down at Noelani. “You want to tell him, Mom?”

Noelani giggles as Steve looks down at her. He’s been teasing her for weeks that there’ll be no mystery, that they’ll have to find out what they’re having because she’ll be able to see it the second she looks at the screen. Her wide grin now tells him he was right. “It’s a girl,” she tells him and damn, he’d sworn he wasn’t going to cry but he can’t help it.

“Yeah?” he asks and she nods. “We’re having a girl?”

“We’re having a girl,” Noelani confirms, “and she’s perfect.”

“Of course she is.” Steve leans down and kisses her firmly. “She’s just like you.”

RE: Fill : Hawaii Five-0, Steve/Noelani (27 x 13 = 351 words)

[identity profile] cozy-coffee.livejournal.com 2020-07-20 06:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] cozy-coffee.livejournal.com 2020-07-20 11:58 am (UTC)(link)
Any, any, a joyful memory

Fill - Prodigal Son, Malcolm Bright, Gil/Jackie Arroyo

[identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com 2020-07-21 02:08 am (UTC)(link)
The sun on his face, the rings in his pocket and the surf pounding in the background, Malcolm smiles at Gil as Jackie proudly says 'I do.'

RE: Fill - Prodigal Son, Malcolm Bright, Gil/Jackie Arroyo

[identity profile] cozy-coffee.livejournal.com 2020-07-21 11:43 am (UTC)(link)
Awww!! Too sweet!

Re: Fill - Prodigal Son, Malcolm Bright, Gil/Jackie Arroyo

[identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com 2020-07-21 04:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

[identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com 2020-07-20 02:23 pm (UTC)(link)
any, any, first cup of coffee/tea

Fill; Any Fandom, Any Male

[identity profile] cozy-coffee.livejournal.com 2020-07-20 02:57 pm (UTC)(link)
When sunny days turn dark and dreary, and hope is far away like a rainbow with a pot of gold that cannot be reached, when everything goes wrong and all the world has come apart at the seams, little, tiny joys can save a heart from shattering under the weight of sorrow.

The first cup of steamy coffee and fluffy pancakes smeared with peanut butter makes him smile brightly. He hadn’t felt this peaceful in forever, but as he take a sip of coffee and his eyes close, his entire body melting, relaxing peacefully, as a fond, beautiful smile graces his lips, he hopes for more lovely days like this one.

(End)

Re: Fill; Any Fandom, Any Male

[identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com 2020-07-20 06:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooo I love it, it's so peaceful and hopeful

[identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com 2020-07-20 02:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Buffy the Vampire Slayer, any, vampire dust

FILL

[identity profile] 4bdnsn0wflake.livejournal.com 2020-07-21 01:00 am (UTC)(link)
Buffy had just wanted to show off her new jacket at The Bronze. She should have known better. Vampire dust was impossible to get out of suede.

Re: FILL

[identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com 2020-07-21 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
Perfect. Poor Buffy. Thank you.

RE: Re: FILL

[identity profile] 4bdnsn0wflake.livejournal.com 2020-07-21 11:50 pm (UTC)(link)
You're very welcome. :)

[identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com 2020-07-20 02:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Prodigal Son, Malcolm Bright. Waking up without having a night terror

Double Fill

[identity profile] vanillafluffy.livejournal.com 2020-07-22 09:40 am (UTC)(link)
The bed is a warm cocoon, its Egyptian cotton sheets smooth as satin against his skin. Sunlight caresses his relaxed eyelids. This morning, there’s no racing heartbeat, no sense of being pursued by an unspeakable horror. It’s such a novel awakening that for a moment, Malcolm has to ask himself: Am I still dreaming?

Re: Double Fill

[identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com 2020-07-22 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh I loved this. I can believe he'd think a good night's sleep was a dream.

[identity profile] svgurl.livejournal.com 2020-07-20 03:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Suits, Harvey/Mike, bet

[identity profile] svgurl.livejournal.com 2020-07-20 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
MCU, T'Challa/Nakia, early mornings

[identity profile] svgurl.livejournal.com 2020-07-20 03:33 pm (UTC)(link)
MCU, Natasha/Pepper, cuddles

FILL

[identity profile] 4bdnsn0wflake.livejournal.com 2020-07-21 01:04 am (UTC)(link)
Most people were not privy to the knowledge that the Black Widow didn’t like thunderstorms. Pepper knew, and was more than happy to cuddle Natasha’s unease away.

Re: FILL

[identity profile] svgurl.livejournal.com 2020-07-21 06:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, that is so cute! I love the implied level of trust within their relationship and how you managed to say so much with so few words.

Great job! Thanks for picking and filling my prompt. :D

RE: Re: FILL

[identity profile] 4bdnsn0wflake.livejournal.com 2020-07-21 11:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! It was my pleasure.

[identity profile] svgurl.livejournal.com 2020-07-20 03:34 pm (UTC)(link)
any, any, kitchen disasters

Fill:

[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com 2020-07-20 08:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Falling asleep while boiling eggs was never to be recommended. The damage to a saucepan boiled dry was bad enough; the smell of exploded eggs was horrendous.

Re: Fill:

[identity profile] svgurl.livejournal.com 2020-07-21 06:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Omg, I both giggled and winced at the same time! Just imagining the smell ... oh man. XD

This was awesome! Thanks for picking and filling my prompt. :D

Re: Fill:

[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com 2020-07-21 06:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] svgurl.livejournal.com 2020-07-20 03:34 pm (UTC)(link)
any, any, memories

[identity profile] templefugate.livejournal.com 2020-07-21 03:31 am (UTC)(link)
Any, any, first love

[identity profile] templefugate.livejournal.com 2020-07-21 03:32 am (UTC)(link)
DC, Diana Prince, stranger in a strange land

[identity profile] templefugate.livejournal.com 2020-07-21 03:33 am (UTC)(link)
MCU, Sam Wilson, the man who fell to earth

Belated Fill: TOS (who rule the world?)

[identity profile] profshallowness.livejournal.com 2020-07-22 05:56 pm (UTC)(link)
"Who wrote that song you were singing yesterday, Nyota?" Christine asked. "It was wonderful."

"Thank you," Nyota replied to her friend. "But haven't you heard of Beyonce Knowles?"

RE: Belated Fill: TOS (who rule the world?)

[identity profile] cozy-coffee.livejournal.com 2020-07-25 07:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely!

Re: Belated Fill: TOS (who rule the world?)

[identity profile] profshallowness.livejournal.com 2020-07-26 08:08 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] emmatheslayer.livejournal.com 2020-07-22 03:57 am (UTC)(link)
True blood ,eric northman / jason stackhouse wait for it

[identity profile] emmatheslayer.livejournal.com 2020-07-22 03:58 am (UTC)(link)
One direction rpf ,harry styles /girl zayn malik ,what, did i miss

FILL

[identity profile] 4bdnsn0wflake.livejournal.com 2020-07-22 11:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Zayn burst through the door, breathless. She swore under breath; her train had been late.

Again.

“What did I miss?”

“Nothing.” Harry smiled. “I waited for you.”

Re: FILL

[identity profile] emmatheslayer.livejournal.com 2020-08-30 05:18 am (UTC)(link)
this is so wonderful i love it thanks lots

Re: FILL

[identity profile] 4bdnsn0wflake.livejournal.com 2020-08-30 08:13 pm (UTC)(link)
You're welcome!

[identity profile] emmatheslayer.livejournal.com 2020-07-22 03:59 am (UTC)(link)
Supernatural , sam winchester / castiel , helpless

[identity profile] emmatheslayer.livejournal.com 2020-07-22 04:00 am (UTC)(link)
Angel the show ,illyria /angel ,burn

[identity profile] emmatheslayer.livejournal.com 2020-07-22 04:01 am (UTC)(link)
Veronica mars , dick casablancas / veronica mars , quiet up town