Would anyone be willing to look over the first part of my Spring Fling fic and tell me if it's okay...or if it sucks...or if something needs to be taken out.
It's about 2,300 words and I'm starting on the second part, but I'm not sure about the first part.
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umm favor?
Feb. 26th, 2012 08:47 pmIt's about 2,300 words and I'm starting on the second part, but I'm not sure about the first part.