Wow! That was fantastic! <3 <3 <3 Thank you so much for writing this! <3 <3 <3
There was so much to love, that it's hard to even know where to begin! I hope my squee isn't too incoherent... ^^;;
I adore your Jane voice. She's intelligent and fierce, yet has a vulnerability that makes her well-rounded and believable as a character.
I loved all the details around the OCs you created! I normally find OCs to be a distraction, but yours really created a rich world for Thor and Jane.
Finally, I loved all the bits of humor you added.
ETA: Oh! I forgot to mention... I loved the nod to women in science. I was a science major myself in college and I work in technology now, so i especially enjoyed those details. :)
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Re: *** Thor 2 spoilers ***
Date: 2014-02-04 11:21 pm (UTC)There was so much to love, that it's hard to even know where to begin! I hope my squee isn't too incoherent... ^^;;
I adore your Jane voice. She's intelligent and fierce, yet has a vulnerability that makes her well-rounded and believable as a character.
I loved all the details around the OCs you created! I normally find OCs to be a distraction, but yours really created a rich world for Thor and Jane.
Finally, I loved all the bits of humor you added.
ETA: Oh! I forgot to mention... I loved the nod to women in science. I was a science major myself in college and I work in technology now, so i especially enjoyed those details. :)
Really terrific! Thank you so much!