ext_25983 ([identity profile] swirlsofblue.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] comment_fic2017-10-03 05:45 am

Tuesday: First line

Hello, everyone. I’m [livejournal.com profile] swirlsofblue and today's theme is First line. Prompts must be the first line of the fills.

Just a few rules:
No more than five prompts in a row.
No more than three prompts in the same fandom.
Use the character's full names and fandom's full name for ease adding to the Lonely Prompts spreadsheet.
No spoilers in prompts for a month after airing, or use the spoiler cut option found here.
If your fill contains spoilers, warn and leave plenty of space, or use the spoiler cut.
If there are possible triggers in your story, please warn for them in the subject line!

Prompts should be formatted as follows: [Use the character's full names and fandom's full name]
Fandom, Character +/ Character, Prompt

Some examples to get the ball rolling...
+ Xmen, Charles Xavier/Erik Lehnsherr, The apocalypse started on a Tuesday
+ Supernatural, Sam Winchester + Dean Winchester, "He started it."
+ Lucifer, Any/Any, The light fell over them, ethereal and incandescent.

We use AO3 to bookmark filled prompts. If you fill a prompt and post it to AO3 please add it to the Bite Sized Bits of Fic from 2017 collection. See further notes on this new option here.

Not feeling any of today’s prompts? Check out Lonely Prompts Spreadsheet 1 (not very current), Lonely Prompts Spreadsheet 2, or the Calendar Archives, or for more recent prompts, you can use LJ's advanced search options to find prompts to request and/or fill.

While the Lonely Prompts Spreadsheets and LJ's advanced search options are available, bookmarking the links of prompts you like might work better for searching for in the future.

[identity profile] cozy-coffee.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 11:16 am (UTC)(link)
Any, any, we have to fight back

[identity profile] cozy-coffee.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 11:17 am (UTC)(link)
Any, any/any, so kiss me

Fill, Original

[identity profile] entireoranges.livejournal.com 2017-10-04 02:55 am (UTC)(link)




“So kiss me.” She laughs
At the request but moves in
“K, if you say so.”

RE: Fill, Original

[identity profile] cozy-coffee.livejournal.com 2017-10-04 08:45 am (UTC)(link)
Cute! Thanks!

[identity profile] cozy-coffee.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 11:18 am (UTC)(link)
Any, any, why did this happen to me?

Fill, Original

[identity profile] entireoranges.livejournal.com 2017-10-04 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
*A really bad pantoum that honestly doesn’t make sense, sorry.*


Why did this happen to me?
The truth is time isn’t always kind
Nor often is it gentle to us
We always say next time until no time remains

The truth is time isn’t always kind
Our regret bucket tends to fill up the fastest
We always say next time until no time remains
Then the day comes and you know no more will follow

Our regret bucket tends to fill up the fastest
When should have said yes and took those risks
Then the day comes and you know no more will follow
The flood of memories overcomes

When should have said yes and took those risks
But in the end we lived life despite it all
The flood of memories overcomes
Just try not to leave this world wondering

But in the end we lived life despite it all
Nor often is it gentle to us
Just try not to leave this Earth wondering
Why did this happen to me?

Re: Fill, Original

[identity profile] cozy-coffee.livejournal.com 2017-10-04 08:45 am (UTC)(link)
That was wonderful! Thank you!!

Re: Fill, Original

[identity profile] 4bdnsn0wflake.livejournal.com 2017-10-04 05:56 pm (UTC)(link)
This is amazing!

Wonderful fill!

[identity profile] evil-little-dog.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 11:33 am (UTC)(link)
Lucifer, Chloe Decker+Any, "Get out of the way!"

FILL

[identity profile] 4bdnsn0wflake.livejournal.com 2017-10-04 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
“Get out of the way!” Chloe shoved Perkins aside and nearly toppled over McMullen.

She stalked into the break room as her fellow officers backed away, staring and silent.

Casey opened his mouth, as if about to dare to speak, but a glare from Det. Decker had him cowering behind his partner.

Chloe, eyes narrowed, curl in her lip, stopped in front of the coffee machine and, brandishing her mug not unlike a weapon, poured herself a steaming cup of java.

Her coworkers avoided eye contact as Chloe strode back to her desk, coffee in hand.

“Jeez,” Ella whispered, “she sure is grumpy in the morning.”

“You have no idea,” Dan and Lucifer said simultaneously.

RE: Re: FILL

[identity profile] 4bdnsn0wflake.livejournal.com 2017-10-05 01:47 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

Re: FILL

[identity profile] evil-little-dog.livejournal.com 2017-10-06 01:58 am (UTC)(link)
Bahahaahahahaha! That's hysterical and delightful!

Re: FILL

[identity profile] 4bdnsn0wflake.livejournal.com 2017-10-06 02:24 am (UTC)(link)
Glad you enjoyed it!

Re: FILL

[identity profile] lil-1337.livejournal.com 2017-10-09 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
The last line was perfect!

Re: FILL

[identity profile] 4bdnsn0wflake.livejournal.com 2017-10-09 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! Thank you!

[identity profile] evil-little-dog.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 11:34 am (UTC)(link)
Any, M+/F, "Are you gonna eat that?"

[identity profile] evil-little-dog.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 11:35 am (UTC)(link)
Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Faith Lehane/Spike, She'd never looked at him as a possible lover before

[identity profile] evil-little-dog.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 11:36 am (UTC)(link)
The X-Files, Dana Scully+Any, "Not again."

[identity profile] reeby10.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 03:04 pm (UTC)(link)
James Bond (Craig movies), James Bond/Q, "Well, that could have gone better."

[identity profile] reeby10.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 03:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them, Credence Barebone/Original Percival Graves, "Do I know you?"

[identity profile] reeby10.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 03:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Crimson Peak, Edith Cushing/Alan McMichael/Thomas Sharpe, Some secrets can't stay hidden.

[identity profile] reeby10.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 03:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Star Trek: AOS, Jim Kirk/Spock, Some relationships are worth fighting for.

[identity profile] reeby10.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 03:05 pm (UTC)(link)
The Following, Paul Torres/Jacob Wells, "I wish things had turned out differently."
tigriswolf: (the devil went down)

[personal profile] tigriswolf 2017-10-03 03:37 pm (UTC)(link)

author's choice, author's choice, would it help if I said sorry?

Fill NCIS, Bishop/Torres

[identity profile] helsinkibaby.livejournal.com 2018-06-12 09:36 pm (UTC)(link)
I went a smidge over... https://archiveofourown.org/works/14916179
tigriswolf: (friends)

Re: Fill NCIS, Bishop/Torres

[personal profile] tigriswolf 2018-06-15 01:41 pm (UTC)(link)

Thank you!

[identity profile] pony-express.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 05:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Any, any/any,"Just. . . Don't!"

[identity profile] classics-lover.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 07:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Leverage, ensemble, "Let's go steal a ... whatever that is..."


betting this has been done before but, oh well

[identity profile] classics-lover.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 07:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Brooklyn Nine-Nine, author's choice, "Stupid having emotions, this is crap!"


NO S5 spoilers please!

[identity profile] classics-lover.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Mass Effect, author's choice, "Somebody needs a hug!"

[identity profile] classics-lover.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 07:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Any (please no SPN), any, "Come with us, come with us to Candy Mountain!"*

*Or any other line from Charlie the Unicorn

[identity profile] classics-lover.livejournal.com 2017-10-03 07:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Tortall, any, "Difficult? I eat difficult for breakfast."

[identity profile] daria234.livejournal.com 2017-10-04 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
Flarrowverse, any m/m, told you

[identity profile] daria234.livejournal.com 2017-10-04 01:47 am (UTC)(link)
MCU or Agents of SHIELD, any m/m or f/f, I got you

[identity profile] daria234.livejournal.com 2017-10-04 01:48 am (UTC)(link)
XMen movies, Charles/Erik or Logan/Scott or Hank/any male or Logan/Storm, You can do that?

[identity profile] evil-little-dog.livejournal.com 2017-10-04 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
Fullmtal Alchemist, Edward Elric + Alphonse Elric, "Don't forget."

[identity profile] emmatheslayer.livejournal.com 2017-10-04 06:46 am (UTC)(link)
True blood,Eric northman/Jason Stackhouse, that's not something I am used too

[identity profile] emmatheslayer.livejournal.com 2017-10-04 06:47 am (UTC)(link)
Supernatural,Colin Ford/Jensen ackles, I am not wearing that

[identity profile] emmatheslayer.livejournal.com 2017-10-04 06:47 am (UTC)(link)
One direction rpf,zayn mailk/Harry styles ,did you get hotter

[identity profile] emmatheslayer.livejournal.com 2017-10-04 06:49 am (UTC)(link)
One direction rpf,niall horan/liam Payne , you come to every show

FILL

[identity profile] 4bdnsn0wflake.livejournal.com 2017-10-04 09:01 pm (UTC)(link)
“You come to every show.”

They had been hanging in Niall’s dressing room after his most recent concert, joking, catching up, shooting the breeze, when Niall blurted the words out with a deep appreciation that made Liam’s cheeks flush pink.

“Yeah, well, I know you’d do the same for me, mate.” Liam scratched the back of his neck, self-conscious at the intensity with which his friend was regarding him.

“I would. I will.” Niall promised. “You’re very important to me, Liam.”

Liam’s blush deepened, and his heart may have even sped up a little. He laughed nervously.

“No need to be so serious.”

Niall looked at him for a moment longer, then his expression changed. He chuckled and clapped Liam on his shoulder.

“Didn’t mean to make you uncomfortable.”

“I’m not…” Liam’s voice had squeaked. He cleared his throat. “I’m not uncomfortable.”

“Good.” Niall smiled easily, but it didn’t quite reach his eyes. “Wouldn’t want you to think I cared too much or anything.”

Liam felt disappointment roil in his gut, and he leaned much closer in toward his friend before he could think better of it. “Niall…I…”

Niall searched the other man’s face, hopeful.

There was a sharp knock on the door, and both men jumped.

“Mr. Horan?” A woman’s head popped through the threshold. “We really need to get going.”

“Right,” Niall looked reluctant to allow the previous moment to pass unresolved, but he was swiftly ushered out of the room, barely given enough time to say goodnight.

Left alone, Liam sighed, sank back into the sofa and rubbed his face with his hands. He’d blown it again.

But every show was a new opportunity to confess his true feelings, and maybe, just maybe, one of these nights he’d get it right.

Re: FILL

[identity profile] emmatheslayer.livejournal.com 2017-10-05 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much for this so cute I love Liam all blushing and cute great work

RE: Re: FILL

[identity profile] 4bdnsn0wflake.livejournal.com 2017-10-05 01:49 am (UTC)(link)
You're welcome! :)

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[identity profile] lil-1337.livejournal.com 2017-10-09 01:00 am (UTC)(link)
You can do it Ninja boy, just say what you need to.

Re: FILL

[identity profile] 4bdnsn0wflake.livejournal.com 2017-10-09 01:49 am (UTC)(link)
The Pudding Pop has laid the foundation, built the house, and hung the "Welcome" sign on the door.

All the Ninja has to do is knock, dammit!

[identity profile] emmatheslayer.livejournal.com 2017-10-04 06:51 am (UTC)(link)
Supernatural,Dean Winchester/Benny ,come here and kiss me