ext_18013 ([identity profile] trinityday.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] comment_fic2009-12-08 06:44 am

Tuesday - Seven Deadly Sins

Hi folks. [livejournal.com profile] trinityday again, your guest host for this week. And today our theme is the seven deadly sins.

Lust (or extravagance). Gluttony. Greed. Sloth (or despair). Wrath. Envy. Pride (or vainglory).

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Please make sure you format your prompts correctly, the last being for crossovers:

Veronica Mars, Veronica/Lilly, lust for life
Dark Angel, Max/Alec, too vain and boastful for her taste
Pirates of the Caribbean/Doctor Who, Jack/Christina, envious of the other's freedom

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[identity profile] sexycazzy.livejournal.com 2009-12-08 12:00 pm (UTC)(link)
NCIS, Gibbs/Tony, Tim, Tim is envious of Gibbs and Tony's secret relationship.
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"You Shall Not", Gibbs/Tony, creepy!Tim, PG

[personal profile] luthien82 2009-12-08 12:47 pm (UTC)(link)
When I started it was not supposed to turn into creepy!Tim, I swear! Hope you like it anyway.


You shall not covet your neighbour’s house; you shall not covet your neighbour’s wife, or male or female slave, or ox, or donkey, or anything that belongs to your neighbour.


Tim was not an envious person per se. In fact, it took him by surprise that he envies Tony - for anything, really, much less his relationship to Gibbs.

At first Tim didn't know the actual extend of Tony and Gibbs' relationship. He'd thought they had a good rapport at work; shared whole insights of a case with just one glance because of their experience; were good pals, united in their inability to switch off from work. Tim was certainly envious of that on occasion.

When he saw Gibbs pressing Tony into the wall in a rarely used corridor near the storage area, kissing Tony as if he might die if he stopped, the envy in Tim reared up its ugly head with a vengeance. He had to duck behind the next corner and take a few deep breaths, but the envy didn't lessen.

In fact, it increased over the next weeks. He noticed little glances and gestures between the two men that had been hidden from him before. And with every private smile from Tony and every slight twinkle in Gibbs' eyes over Tony's antics, Tim's envy grew. It made him surly and mean. It was like an out-of-body experience sometimes. He actually cringed at some of the things he said and did to Tony, even though he'd rather have done the complete opposite and cradled him to his chest, proclaiming to Gibbs that he couldn't have Tony because he was Tim's.

His mother had raised him well. He grew up with the Bible, and while he did not practice religion these days, he had always believed in the rightness of the words. But now, he wishes nothing more than to trade places with Gibbs. You shall not covet your neighbour's wife. Whoever thought he might lust after his "neighbour's husband" instead?

Tim was not an envious person per se. But deep down, Tim had to admit that Tony's relationship to Gibbs made him envious like hell. For now, he had it under control. But sometimes… he was scared as hell of what he might do if the envy in him won out in the end.
Edited 2009-12-08 12:55 (UTC)
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Re: "You Shall Not", Gibbs/Tony, creepy!Tim, PG

[identity profile] sexycazzy.livejournal.com 2009-12-08 02:59 pm (UTC)(link)
That was brilliant! I truly loved it! Poor Tim! :) Thank you!

Re: "You Shall Not", Gibbs/Tony, creepy!Tim, PG

[personal profile] samueljames 2009-12-08 06:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Really liked this.