Kayobi - Prompt is the Last Line
Jan. 25th, 2011 07:50 amHello! I'm still
tiptoe39 and I am still stoked to be your host for
comment_fic this week.
Yesterday we got some first lines to work off of, because sometimes you just need a place to start. But sometimes the problem is the opposite - you've got an opening, but where do you end it? So today let's give our writers a last line and see how they get there.
As always, obey the rules:
Feed the overworked codemonkeys correctly formatted prompts:
If you don't see a safe landing for your flight of fancy today, head back to our Lonely Prompts and see where they take you.
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Yesterday we got some first lines to work off of, because sometimes you just need a place to start. But sometimes the problem is the opposite - you've got an opening, but where do you end it? So today let's give our writers a last line and see how they get there.
As always, obey the rules:
- Three prompts per fandom, and no more than five total. If one of your prompts is filled, you may post another.
- No spoilers for new shows/seasons until at least one week after airing.
- If your fill contains spoilers, please warn for it and leave enough space for people to pass by.
Feed the overworked codemonkeys correctly formatted prompts:
- Merlin, Merlin/Arthur, Blushing, he said sheepishly, "Maybe sometimes."
- Supernatural, author's choice, They didn't have any trouble getting to sleep after that.
- Torchwood/Firefly, Jack/Mal, "I'll drink to that."
If you don't see a safe landing for your flight of fancy today, head back to our Lonely Prompts and see where they take you.
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Date: 2011-01-25 01:04 pm (UTC)Fill! Set somewhere in after 5x10 (Also forgive my Belial. She is hard to write.)
Date: 2011-01-25 02:34 pm (UTC)Once upon a time, when they were young - fledglings, they were friends. They had sat by each others side in the fields of Heaven, while she healed him. Long ago, she had carded her fingers through his wings, tangling rose petals into them, and whispered promises to him, and they had laughed.
And her promises were different, so different from the ones she gave to others.
Even now. Long after she changed. Long after she disgraced Raphael. Long after he has watched her leave Heaven. After he's watched her Fall. After he's seen her become one of the things he hates, she is still beautiful. She is inviting, tempting, tangible.
Her promises are inviting too. More tempting than Lucifer's. Castiel would listen. It's all to easy to listen. To give in. To take refuge in an old friend, when Heaven has turned against him. She is taking him in, pressing those same roses she would give him into the hands of his vessel, whispering sweet words in his ears, before she is gone. A butterfly kiss, leaving the taste of nectar on his lips.
But her promises are the same, the same ones she gives to everyone. The ones she tempts to sin, the maidens she calls to become Lucifer's brides, the demons she rules. And he is no different from any of those to her.
He burns the roses to ashes. He doesn't regret it.
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