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Hello! I'm still [livejournal.com profile] tiptoe39 and I am still stoked to be your host for [livejournal.com profile] comment_fic this week.

Yesterday we got some first lines to work off of, because sometimes you just need a place to start. But sometimes the problem is the opposite - you've got an opening, but where do you end it? So today let's give our writers a last line and see how they get there.

As always, obey the rules:

  • Three prompts per fandom, and no more than five total. If one of your prompts is filled, you may post another.
  • No spoilers for new shows/seasons until at least one week after airing.
  • If your fill contains spoilers, please warn for it and leave enough space for people to pass by.



Feed the overworked codemonkeys correctly formatted prompts:

  • Merlin, Merlin/Arthur, Blushing, he said sheepishly, "Maybe sometimes."
  • Supernatural, author's choice, They didn't have any trouble getting to sleep after that.
  • Torchwood/Firefly, Jack/Mal, "I'll drink to that."



If you don't see a safe landing for your flight of fancy today, head back to our Lonely Prompts and see where they take you.

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Date: 2011-01-25 12:53 pm (UTC)
ext_236704: (SPN / are you speaking in tongues?)
From: [identity profile] ravenspear.livejournal.com
Supernatural; Castiel/Sam; It feels a bit like peace.

Date: 2011-01-25 01:04 pm (UTC)
ext_236704: (AS / poisonously pretty)
From: [identity profile] ravenspear.livejournal.com
Angel Sanctuary/Supernatural; Belial/Castiel; He burns the rose to ashes. He doesn't regret it.
From: [identity profile] nights-fang.livejournal.com
She is beautiful. Her wings, her eyes, her manners, her grace, her everything. Not in the orthodox way that Alexiel, and Lord Rosiel were. Her beauty is different. She is beautiful in ways and words that cannot be articulated. Her beauty is open, tempting, inviting, tangible, not cold and unreachable like the two highest angels.

Once upon a time, when they were young - fledglings, they were friends. They had sat by each others side in the fields of Heaven, while she healed him. Long ago, she had carded her fingers through his wings, tangling rose petals into them, and whispered promises to him, and they had laughed.

And her promises were different, so different from the ones she gave to others.

Even now. Long after she changed. Long after she disgraced Raphael. Long after he has watched her leave Heaven. After he's watched her Fall. After he's seen her become one of the things he hates, she is still beautiful. She is inviting, tempting, tangible.

Her promises are inviting too. More tempting than Lucifer's. Castiel would listen. It's all to easy to listen. To give in. To take refuge in an old friend, when Heaven has turned against him. She is taking him in, pressing those same roses she would give him into the hands of his vessel, whispering sweet words in his ears, before she is gone. A butterfly kiss, leaving the taste of nectar on his lips.

But her promises are the same, the same ones she gives to everyone. The ones she tempts to sin, the maidens she calls to become Lucifer's brides, the demons she rules. And he is no different from any of those to her.

He burns the roses to ashes. He doesn't regret it.

Date: 2011-01-25 01:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kijikun.livejournal.com
Supernatural, Balthazar/Lisa, "I keep my promises, Ben."

Date: 2011-01-25 01:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rise-your-dead.livejournal.com
Burn Notice, Sam/Mike, "You talk too much, Mike," he said, and kissed him.

Date: 2011-01-25 01:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rise-your-dead.livejournal.com
Burn Notice, Mike/Sam/Fi, "I do love you."

Date: 2011-01-25 01:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rise-your-dead.livejournal.com
Burn Notice, Sam/Fi, "It's time I tried something new," she laughed.

Date: 2011-01-25 01:14 pm (UTC)
ext_236704: (Text / i think intensely)
From: [identity profile] ravenspear.livejournal.com
Deadly Premonition; York/Thomas; "Well," York says, smiling. "That was fun."

Date: 2011-01-25 01:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kijikun.livejournal.com
Supernatural, John/Gabriel, "You talk in your sleep, Gabriel, and I'm not an idiot."

Date: 2011-01-25 01:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rise-your-dead.livejournal.com
Evil Dead Trilogy, Ash/Sheila, "I did it for you."

Date: 2011-01-25 01:16 pm (UTC)
ext_236704: (JP / hee hee)
From: [identity profile] ravenspear.livejournal.com
Deadly Premonition; any; "So says Mister Stewart."

Date: 2011-01-25 01:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rise-your-dead.livejournal.com
The Simpsons, Simpsons Family, And it was the weirdest vacation ever.

Date: 2011-01-25 01:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kijikun.livejournal.com
Supernatural, Lucifer/Jo, Castiel, Lucifer watches Jo put the nestling into the nest and thanks Father (and perhaps Becky) for this second chance.

Date: 2011-01-25 01:22 pm (UTC)
ext_236704: (Text / insanity caused by lack of sleep)
From: [identity profile] ravenspear.livejournal.com
Supernatural; Balthazar/Dean + resultant spawn; "Okay, I admit it; she is a little bit cute."

Date: 2011-01-25 01:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kijikun.livejournal.com
SyFy's Alice, Alice/Hatter, "You aren't your father, Hatter, you'll be a wonderful daddy."

Date: 2011-01-25 01:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] l3petitemort.livejournal.com
Criminal Minds, Elle/Morgan, "I told you so."

Date: 2011-01-25 01:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] l3petitemort.livejournal.com
Criminal Minds, Reid/Garcia, She usually is.

Date: 2011-01-25 01:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] l3petitemort.livejournal.com
Criminal Minds, Reid/Prentiss, "Wet is good, Reid," she winked.

Date: 2011-01-25 01:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nevcolleil.livejournal.com
Chuck/Prison Break, Chuck + Michael and/or Lincoln, "Well. As far as diversions go, I think that one went pretty well."

Date: 2011-01-25 02:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] octavia5000.livejournal.com
Changi, Bill/Curley, After a few days the memories were much less painful, and after a week or so they weren't much anything at all.

Date: 2011-01-25 02:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] octavia5000.livejournal.com
Changi, any/Tommy, He didn't.

Date: 2011-01-25 02:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] octavia5000.livejournal.com
Changi, Gordon/Curley, It seemed to Gordon that it wasn't too much to handle after all.

Date: 2011-01-25 02:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] octavia5000.livejournal.com
Gears of War, Marcus/Dom, "No," he whispered, "I guess you don't, huh?"
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