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so the story I mentioned here has a sequel! The first story ended with a proposal, marriage and introduction of a baby. The 2nd story has the baby (named Daniel Steven McGarrett) and a fairly decent case (Steve abducted by someone from Grace's past).

Why did I look up this author? I was curious to see if there was a sequel. so far it's at 13 chapters. I read all 13 chapters and kept going wtf?! and the comments...omg. well written? not really. good characterization? whoa nelly, NO! But I know this is an AU, I just can't get over Steve being in love with Grace! The girl called him uncle! Her father is his best friend! and don't even get me started (again) on how calm Danny and Rachel were about it!

But anyways...this sequel...if I try to ignore the pairing, which is hard considering it's mentioned a lot, the story is okay.

morbid curiocity is going to have me following this new story until it's complete...and hope that there's no more. But the author has said the more they write Grace/Steve the more they love the pairing. IDGI

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