Monday: Firsts

[lilyleia78]

Hello fellow comment_ficcers! I’m lilyleia78, and I’ll be guest hosting this little shin-dig for the week.

For my first theme, let’s do firsts – first love, first fight, first day, first meeting. Was it love at first sight or did the first realization of love come later? Tell us about the first time something happened to your characters, or have them tell each other. Let’s see your creativity at work!

Please be kind to our over-worked codemonkeys and use the correct format (the second is for crossovers).

Fandom, Pairing, Prompt
Fandom1/Fandom2, Pairing, Prompt

For example:
SGA, Lorne/Parrish, first flower of spring
Buffy, Spike/Buffy, ‘Do you remember the first time?’

And remember not to post more than 5 prompts in a row, and please limit yourselves to 3 prompts per fandom per prompter. If a prompt is answered, you can prompt again later in the day.

Don’t see anything that whets your appetite? Give a Lonely Prompt a home.

Comments

[snarky-kat.livejournal.com]

Dollhouse, Alpha/Echo, first time she notices him back

Re: who's so far away; PG

[dreamsofspike.livejournal.com]

perfect... i've had a hard time writing the dolls in their doll states... but you've captured the mentality they seem to have perfectly... this is exactly as i would have imagined it... very well done, love :)

who's so far away, PG SPOILERS for Omega ep 1x12 of Dollhouse

[danniisupernova.livejournal.com]

"Hello Echo."

"Hello Alpha."

Alpha is nice thinks Echo.

*
Echo and Whiskey are painting together. Echo thinks Whiskey is nice and very pretty. I want to be my best says Whiskey one day.

*

There is paint on Whiskey's face. It's red.

Alpha is standing over her with scissors.

"Why don't you let Echo be the best?"

Alpha is nice.

*

The water is warm, very warm. The water is red. Everyone around her is asleep. Echo stares up at Alpha. "Hello, Echo."

"Hello, Alpha."

The water stops.

"Why won't they wake up?" He smiles at her. It scares her.

"Don't worry, Echo. They aren't real anymore. I'm real. I don't understand. I understand. Do you know what Hell is Echo?"

"No, Alpha."

"I'll show you." He holds out his hand. Echo reaches out to take it. There is the sound of running from down the hall.

Alpha is gone.

*
"Would you like a treatment, Echo?"

"Yes, thank you."

*

Bright, blinding lights.

Alpha is gone.

Re: who's so far away, PG SPOILERS for Omega ep 1x12 of Dollhouse

[juliet316]

Very interesting stream of conciousness fic from Echo's POV.