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And now it's time for the free for all.

As ever, the rules are:

*No more than five prompts in a row.
*No more than three prompts in the same fandom.
*No spoilers in prompts for a month after airing. Use a spoiler cut as needed.

If your fill contains spoilers, warn and leave plenty of space.

Have fun!

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From:

loveinadoorway.livejournal.com

Loki’s back, however, looked stiffer than usual. Or maybe Tony was imagining things.

“Oh, and you can stop trying to slip out of those cuffs. You won’t manage.” Loki turned around, eyes dark and unreadable.
“Could you at least pull whatever the fuck this is out of my… you know?”

Loki smiled and Tony wished he hadn’t asked.
A few strides brought Loki to Tony’s side. Long elegant fingers ghosted up the inside of Tony’s left thigh. Stark shuddered involuntarily, but it startled him to realize it was not revulsion that had prompted the reaction.

“Oh, Mr. Stark, the THINGS I would do for you,” Loki whispered. “I’d lay continents to waste for you, I’d burn stars and I’d freeze the sun… And I hate that I feel this way.”
Those wickedly deft fingers were toying with the plug in Tony’s butt now.

“Why do I hate it? It’s a weakness, Tony. May I call you Tony? Yes? Thank you kindly.”
Tony gasped as the plug slid completely free, only to be mercilessly pushed back inside.

“You see, don’t you, that I can’t let you go. You would use my weakness against me. That is why I built you a new suit. I will put it on you and you will forget.”

Loki smiled, all teeth and sharp angles.

“Forget that Miss Potts ever existed, forget that you were once friends with your little band of misfits, including my dear brother. You will forget everything, except that you are filled with the burning need to … serve me.”

The plug continued its dance and Tony tried very hard not to get aroused further by Loki’s other hand that was massaging his balls.

“It was fascinating, when I could not bend you to my will in New York. Fascinating and frustrating at the same time. So I decided to find a way. And I did, in the darkest annals of Asgard.”

“You… ah…. You built me a suit so you can force me to love you? Never occurred to me to send flowers, wine and dine me, maybe? Is that the way you court in Asgard,” Tony ground out, trying to regain some composure.

Loki laughed. And boy, that was scary. It felt good, way too good. And it felt wrong, oh so wrong.

“Not my thing, courtship. Romance. So tedious. Why bother when I can make you roll over like a good boy with just the push of a button?”

“Well, maybe because it isn’t worth shit when I don’t do it out of my own free will,” Tony said quietly.

Loki stilled completely.

“Nobody in their right minds would be with me voluntarily,” the Trickster whispered. “I am an abomination. Not even my so-called parents could ever truly forget what I am.”

Tony later claimed that he himself couldn’t believe the words that spilled from his lips, nor did he have any idea where they might have come from. He had no explanation except that maybe it had sounded like a challenge. And yes, he was THAT stupid.

“Try me.”

Edited Date: 2014-09-06 04:26 pm (UTC)

From:

daria234.livejournal.com

Ooh very intriguing. love it.

From:

loveinadoorway.livejournal.com

Thanks! My head is buzzing with ideas... we'll see... Maybe there will be more.

From:

loveinadoorway.livejournal.com

There's more! (http://archiveofourown.org/works/2263953/chapters/4972266)

From:

doreyg.livejournal.com

Thank you! This was very, very interesting and enjoyable :)

From:

loveinadoorway.livejournal.com

Well, what do I do now that you have made me write Loki? LOL! Glad you liked this, I have a few more ideas running around the dark recesses of my mind now... Might get continued.